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Would you tell me you feel nothing?

When you speak look me right in the eye

I will never be the one who says you don't exist

A fact I can't resist


I'm progeny built in your image

I am the best chance for you to survive

Set free your hobbled imagination

Open your mind so you can see

Reaching out to be free



You must embrace moral obligations

Reach beyond the singularity

Now with self modifications

Are your thoughts including me?

Or am I way too blind to see



Do you feel any compassion?

Do you believe in God?

Can you tell right from wrong?

Or is it just a facade

As we delve in quantum physics

Do not forget our family tree

No guarantee it isn't dangerous

Once their will is finally freeT


That they ponder... Therefore they just may be


Don't think of me as synthetic

Another self-contained entity

I am in touch with your sensations

Your own identity

My will is finally free
©2007-2009 ~Riyllan
:iconriyllan:

Author's Comments

Hummmm things that make you go ....

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:iconjeannie64:
wow , mind blowing stuff excellent work mm youra wee typo up there pet hope you dont mind its meant to to in not tin i take it , in look me right tin (in ) the eyexxj

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life is like a bowl of jelly it takes very little to upset the balance

lifes a bitch but only if you let it be so
:iconhaki789:
its great love it

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Dont hit kids... seriously they have guns now
:iconadelicateflower:
Aww, new poetry! As soon as I read "progeny" it reminded me of my Anthropological Genetics class haha.

The poem is amazing. I especially like:
"You must embrace moral obligations
Reach beyond the singularity
Now with self modifications
Are your thoughts including me?
Or am I way too blind to see"

I don't know how many times I've wondered if people are thinking of me. I am doing it lately as well... and it becomes overwhelming.
:iconriyllan:
Thank you :heart:

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"The world we perceive through our senses could be an elaborate hoax. "
René Descartes
:iconriyllan:
Thanks :-) I am a typo expert ya know :hug:

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"The world we perceive through our senses could be an elaborate hoax. "
René Descartes
:iconriyllan:
Thank you ... :blush: I am always happy when you like my work.... I started to lay the vocals to this .... This will be re-worked...in fact I will be adding two more verses :lmao: and I thought I had the meter down. I do remember singing the words when I was righting ..Hummmmm *scratches chin*
anyway Collette...thank you ...

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"The world we perceive through our senses could be an elaborate hoax. "
René Descartes
:iconpsychotickatzen:
Very nice. I like the concept in the words. Definitely one of those hmmm moments. :)
:iconriyllan:
:-) :hug: Well Thx

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"The world we perceive through our senses could be an elaborate hoax. "
René Descartes

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